
Giant sequoia and fir tree in the fog, Sequoia National Park, California, 1993
WHISPERS IN THE FOG
© 1999 William Neill
Here is an essay I wrote in 1999. Enjoy!
Simplicity. Subtly. These are words I value highly in my landscape photography. I love making quiet and simple images. I strive to distill those aspects of nature that whisper, that entice the viewer to delve deeper— into the image and, most importantly, into nature.
A common tendency for landscape photographers is to include too much information. Too many mountains or trees. Too much foreground or sky. It is a natural and enthusiastic response to a great location or scene. Let’s describe it all! After all, it is the entire 360-degree experience of sound and smell that makes us raise up our camera. It is difficult to tell the whole story in one frame so what happens, most often, is that the resulting image is merely a description. Including too much has the effect of diluting the composition. Had the photographer paused to consider how to create a composition that encapsulates the experience, the viewer will have a better chance to sense the place through the photographer’s eyes. To distill is the key idea here; to isolate and concentrate the key elements of the photographer’s interaction with the scene. Through this process of focusing compositionally, the selective process gives one a better opportunity to discover a new viewpoint.
A few years ago (1993), I traveled to Sequoia National Park on an assignment for Sunset Magazine. My job was to photograph the Sequoia groves in the park, and especially the less-protected groves south of the park. As I drove into the first grove on my assignment list, a thick fog enveloped the sequoia forest. These conditions were not exactly the ideal conditions for the work at hand. Yet I was entranced. Perhaps I could make an image that would evoke the Sequoia’s timeless and epic qualities in a new way. And happily, the magazine sent me right when the dogwood were in bloom.
I spent the next few hours wondering amongst the dogwood and Giant Sequoia as the fog sifted through the woods. Slowly and subtly, the fog thickened and lightened on a soft breeze. I listened to a tape of Japanese flute music while I photographed, intensifying the wondrous experience.
What the fog provided me was a forest simplified. The combination of soft light, and the reduction of depth and detail provided by the fog allowed me to distill the key elements around me. I photographed dogwood branches, with their blossoms seemingly suspended in air and floating in the fog. With my wide angle lens captured two lone sequoias soaring up into the fog, an image that was later used in a Nike ad! I photographed a dogwood tree growing in front of a sequoia. I made vertical and horizontal images in panoramic format. The creative juices were flowing, and I worked the scene until no more ideas would come.
In the photograph shown here, “Giant sequoia and fir tree in the fog, Sequoia National Park, California 1993,” I chose a normal focal length 150mm lens for the 4×5. I composed the image so that the tree filled more than half the frame. The small fir tree contrasts dramatically with the massive sequoia. Only a small part of the huge tree is included in the photograph yet its presence is felt. The forest floor was cluttered with fallen branches, so I raised the front standard of my view camera to eliminate the distraction. This movement also served to keep the lines of the trees parallel. By not settling for the obvious approach—describing the whole tree—I discovered a fresh viewpoint, one that leaves the viewer to imagine the rest of the picture outside my frame.
The fog was gone the next day; the sun came out so was able to make the type of images needed for the assignment. Not surprisingly, the magazine did not use any of my photographs made in the fog, but many of them have been subsequently published and exhibited in galleries. It was a successful trip on all quarters, especially for me artistically!
My mantra, once again, is Simplicity and Subtly.
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July 13, 2019 at 1:05 AM
Beautiful, William.
November 1, 2018 at 6:42 AM
Article writing is also a fun, if you be familiar with then you
can write if not it is complex to write.
September 7, 2016 at 8:57 AM
Vladimir,
Thanks for your kind words. Sure, I’ll take a look at your book PDF.
To read more of my essays, see: http://www.outdoorphotographer.com/pro-perspectives/william-neill/
September 6, 2016 at 9:08 PM
I have read all the comments to your interesting article and your amazing works. I love your approach to landscape photography: simplicity, wisdom and poetry. I am now 80 and I still try to improve my photography. I did several books and I would like to show some for you to may be say some words about my photographs. May I send you one of my book PDF?
Thank you.
September 6, 2016 at 9:20 AM
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Cheers, Bill
September 5, 2016 at 5:36 PM
Hi Bill, how wonderful to get your emailed newsletter. Thank you for reposting this “old” article; its message is never old! It’s something of which I need to be reminded occasionally. Sometimes what I do is put the telephoto zoom on the camera and tell myself, this is it, this is the only lens I’m going to use for (the rest of) this shoot. That disciplines me to “think small.” (Of course, it helps if conditions are favorable, e.g., backlighting for strange-looking plants.) This photo of the sequoia is amazing. I especially like the contrast between the detailed sequoia and the fog-enveloped tree.
September 5, 2016 at 12:18 PM
Hi Karpani!
Great to hear from you! Glad that you get the feeling of my experience!
September 4, 2016 at 11:00 AM
I love the ethereal feel of this beautiful photograph. And as you described Simplicity and Subtly, I could viscerally feel the urge to “include it all” to get the “full picture.” By this photograph, I can feel the difference between the documentation and the expression of feeling in the moment. Thank you for this important reminder and graphic experience! Best to you and Sadhna!
August 31, 2016 at 9:52 AM
You are welcome, Dick!
August 31, 2016 at 8:11 AM
Bill,
this image touches me like your Impressions of Light series. Subtle reality held at bay by the fog. I can almost hear, nothing.
And…thanks for coming back to the blog. I’ve never jumped aboard the social media vehicles.
Thanks for opening me to this “older” image.
Dick Riebel
August 30, 2016 at 10:31 AM
Thanks for feedback. I wrote the chapter is this book about composition:
The Digital SLR Expert- Landscapes
https://www.amazon.com/Digital-SLR-Expert-Landscapes/dp/0715329405
Hope this might help! You can also read many of my essays from Outdoor Photographer here: http://www.outdoorphotographer.com/pro-perspectives/william-neill/
August 30, 2016 at 9:53 AM
for several years I have admired the way you isolate your subject. Every time I go out into the cluttered landscape I try hard to emulate your SIMPLICITY. Unfortunately that process still evades me.
Have you published any books or articles on how you break down the scene? I’ve studied Photographers all my life and your style is the one I most admire!
August 30, 2016 at 8:21 AM
Thanks so much Carmel and James. I hope you enjoyed the story too! Keep in touch.
August 29, 2016 at 5:51 PM
Wow! What a beautiful image that gives you a feeling of serenity and mood.
August 29, 2016 at 5:45 PM
Beautiful, William. It says so much more than ‘standard’ shots.
August 29, 2016 at 3:15 PM
You are most welcome. Yes, you need to see the big trees for yourself!
August 29, 2016 at 3:07 PM
Wonderful photo and article. I had not seen them before and thoroughly enjoyed both. I love both fog images and images in the woods. I have only seen the giant trees through photos, although that is perhaps on my bucket list! Thanks for sharing.